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Thursday, 9 March 2017

WALT:Write a poem using a metaphor

1.Lucky is an annoying fly that buzzes pass your ear.

2. Lucky is a pimped out 5 star hotel.

3. Lucky is a red Mustang with showy driver.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Kia Ora Lucky
I like your poem you wrote. The thing that I liked was because you had some metaphors in it and my favourite line was the first one. I done a poem about me but I didn't post it on my blog yet. What is a thing that you like about yourself?Why?

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Marie said...

hi lucky you have a really good peom about buzzing bees

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